This is an excellent post by Dan Alatorre on adding texting as dialogue material to your stories. His take on form made a great deal of sense to me, so I thought I’d share it here.
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We know how to write a sentence: noun, verb… a period at the end.
We know how to show dialog when our characters speak.
Dan scratched his head. “We do?”
“Yep,” she said.
But it turns out, we DON’T know how to depict a text conversation in a story! I checked.
There’s no uniform way.
Oh, The Chicago Manual Of Style (CMOS) has a suggestion in the Q&A – but it sucks.
And other authors are trying to nail it down, especially the YA writers. Or they write around it.
Look, anybody can do this:
“how r u,” he texted;
“ha ha Daddy I can’t believe you use ‘r u,’” she replied.”
AWFUL. You wouldn’t use so many tags in a conversation showing speech, or regular conversational dialog, but here it’s supposed to be okay?
No.
No, no, no, no, no, no.
I (accidentally) used several styles…
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